2018.9.29 雅思写作解析
TASK 1The graph below shows percentages of different types of household waste which were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002.Su妹妹arize the information by selecting 房地二胎,and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.
思绪阐发
注重：横坐标是每种家庭垃圾，而不是时候轴；三种分歧色彩的柱状图暗示每种垃圾在三个时候的变革趋向。
1.果断出是动态图表：由于有时候的变革。
2.按照趋向划分段落：
主体段1：plastic的收受接管量在三个年份基底细同 similar / almost the same quantities. 也可描写成：plastic收受接管量在1992年盘踞10%，在1997和2002年收受接管量是不异的。cans的收受接管量从1992到1997年先迟钝的降低 decreased slightly，在2002年收受接管量跨越了1997年的两倍 more than doubled (可以用while毗连).
主体段2：paper的收受接管量从1992-1997年迟钝上升 saw a steady increase，接下来快速的上升 soared to appropriately 30% ，收受接管量是早期阶段的三倍 triple = three times as much as. 曩昔的三年中，glass的收受接管量是上升幅度最大的，此中在1997和2002年，glass recycled accounted for the largest proportion at around 30% and 50% respectively.
总结：在1992年，四种垃圾的收受接管量是基底细同；在2002年，glass的收受接管量盘踞比例最大，远远跨越其他几种垃圾的收受接管量。
TASK 2
Team / group activities can teachmore important skills for lifethan those activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
标题大意：团队勾当比那些零丁举行的勾当更能教会咱们糊口中更首要的技术。
类似标题：
Some people think it is more effective for students to study in groups，while others believe it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
小我概念：分歧意。我认为集团和独自勾当等同首要。
It has been claimed that people can learn more practical skills through teamwork than working alone. However, I believe that group activities and solo working are equally important throughout people's life. (I believe that both sides have their superiorities.)
团队勾当的益处
1.可以经由过程团队勾当进修若何跟他人互助。
Group work helps people learn how towork with people outside their circle of friends, including those who have different backgrounds and experiences. They can even learn how to work with those who disagree with them, and others they might not “like” or want as friends.
2.团队互助可以帮人们更好领会身旁的同事，构成杰出的人际瓜葛(下面别离从成人和学生两个维度开展会商)。
People may have more opportunities to get along well with their colleges and therefore develop valuableinterpersonal relationship，which enables them tohave a better job prospect.
Students have the opportunity to learn tosocialize with others. Many sociologists point out that people in modern society are more isolated than those in ancient times mainlybecausethey do not have enough opportunities to get along with others. Under such circumstances,it is unreasonableto deprive the students of the chance to socialize by arranging them to study alone.
3.团队互助可以晋升小我的沟通能力。
Group work provides an environment in whi植牙,ch people canexchange ideas with each otherand therefore effectivelyenhances their co妹妹unication skillsneeded in working place，which alsoplays an indispensable part inachieving mutual interest.
自力勾当的益处
1.可以锻自力思虑息争决问题的能力。
Working alone maycultivate individuals' independent thinkingandproblem-solving ability. If people turn to others for help whenever they encounter difficulties，it would be extremely tough when facing with new challenges either in their study or working place.
2.自力@进%h3CHc%修或事%7YdFC%情@可以培育高效进修能力。
we cannot neglect theeffectiveness of working or studying alone. For example, in a big class, top students might feel bored because the teacher does not give them enough material to learn whereas poor students might feel just the oppositebecausethe teacher gives them too many materials to digest. In other words, the teacher usually slows down the rate of progress or reduces the content of his lesson in the light of students with lower ability.
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